The kids in Mrs Lunn's Literacy group LOVE writing! Today's picture prompt really captured the imagination of the kids. Here is a photo of the piece of writing that we wrote together and then a couple of stories the children want to share with you.
Note: The yellow highlighted words are what the children think we did well. The green highlighted words are what we added in or changed to make our shared story even better!
Subway Surfer by Hunter Wylie
I stood at the dark train station. I heard the train thundering into the station. I grabbed onto the train as it began to thunder out of the station. I saw a man holding a camera and I… snatched the camera off of him “ HEY STOP!” the man shouted. "Thanks brah" I called as I headed to Auckland.
Subway Surfer by Timi
Whoosh! I am going to steal the new fancy camera I hid behind him consciously. The man turned away his face so I grabbed the camera. I saw the train was about to go, so I grabbed the door like I was flying in the air.
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