Our Greatest Sporting Moment

Today in Mrs Lunn's Writing Opt-in, we had a think about our greatest sporting moment. We even watched a video of Jonah Lomu's greatest tries, for a bit of inspiration.

We came up with a few ideas for words that we might need in our writing:

Then we helped Mrs Lunn write a 'Moment in Time' piece of writing. We decided that we would write from the perspective of Jonah.

We went through our writing and high-lighted yellow all the bits of the writing we liked. Then it was our turn:

The kids are still finishing typing up their stories, so please check back later to see some more stories.