Today in Mrs Lunn's Writing Opt in, we had to write a mystery story. Mrs Lunn had done an example for us. We went through her writing to see what we liked and didn't like about it.
Have a read of her writing and see what you think...
Then... we had a turn. We used some of the words that we liked in Mrs Lunn's story in our writing. We really liked words like billowed and scanned. We think this makes our writing sound really flash!
Have a read of our work and see what you think. We hope you like our stories - don't get too frightened!
great story's guys!!!