Today for writing, some of us had to Design a Planet. We had so much fun thinking of the jobs that there would be on our planet, the laws and the natural resources that there would be there.
Here's Mrs Lunn's planning sheet example...
We helped Mrs Lunn come up with a piece of writing encouraging people to migrate to the new planet.
And here are our stories:
Planet Candy floss - By Ethan W
Let Planet Candy floss be home to you. Dance all night with our most popular Dancer Dame Tu Cosita in our open air stadium. Ever wanted to live in a smoking and vaping free zone? Planet candy floss is where you want to be!
Planet Derpy - By Devon
Come to the most Derpy planet in the solar system Planet Derpydon. This planet contains Derpymon and Derpy people. So if you like Derpy things, this is your planet. You get the jobs petting zoo keeper, DNA tester, Derpymon zoo keeper. Planet Derpydon even has mythical creatures it also has the swear word 'grape'. So are you convinced yet? So that is why you should come to planet DERPYDON!!!
Planet Boblin - by Ivy
Let planet Boblin be your new home. We have got everything!! And Dame Tu Castio lives on planet Boblin. If you hate him, come because you can adopt little cute baby aliens. There's some things you’ll need to keep NO PLAYING WITH THE MONSTER aliens or you’ll be in hospital. And be careful of the river, it's made of molten cotton candy but there's still fresh air. Just to say "Boblins safe" if you’ll make it safe. Just NEVER knock on Dame Tu Casitos door. The cool thing is you don’t have to pay for food at the alien supermarket . That's why Boblin's best. Call Planet Boblin home today!
Ivy read her story for Mrs Lunn to video - the Boblin voice is so cute. Have a listen - apologies about the background noise - it was pack up time!
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