Today I set a writing activity for your Distance Learning. You had to read my writing and then tell me what you thought I did well, or where I could improve. Thanks for your feedback on that. I promise I will improve my writing for next time :-)
Then I challenged you to write you own stories! WOW, WOW, WOW! AMAZING! You are such clever writers. I am so impressed! You are using a mixture of longer and shorter sentences (which adds suspense). I love all the adjectives like bright and colourful. Some clever writers are fabulous and included adverbs in their writing.
For example - which sounds better?
I lifted the curtain
or
I carefully lifted the curtain
???
The adverb describes the verb. So how did you lift the curtain - carefully. So carefully is the adverb.
Maybe try using adverbs a bit more in your writing - they are really flash!
Have a read of these stories. See what you think. I highlighted yellow what I liked about them. Do you agree?
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